The Primary Reason Behind Demanding Kids
To Much Advertisements in surrounding
To embark with, children get Attract Easily and whenever they saw new things they wish to get them and in result parents Had to Fulfil their needs. However, in this way they will not able to become independent in their future life.
They will find difficulties to become self independent. Moreover, they will find it hard to earn and save money. In addition, they will become lazy and They will not focus on their study. They will rely on their parents for theirs needs for whole life
To Much Freedom
Probing further, giving to much freedom to Childrens have to much negative effects. firstly, they can Join Bad circle of Friends and they can Make or Join Negative gangs.
Apart from this, by joining bad Gangs, They can Take Drugs which will Effect their Health. Besides this, they can Commit Crimes to fullfil their Needs and in this way, they will become criminals which can effect Their life in Hazardous way
To Conclude
In conclusion, before letting my pen down, i would like to say that, Fulfilling the every demand and need of children have many Negative effects on their development and Freedom should be given in a limit.
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